Opponent:
my rap if ain't d best, but good enuf to get u vexed,
rap ain't jus bout crap , it's more of sensible rhymin of text...
Me:
u say i m insensible just coz you cant undastand it
improve ur language skills i'm a tell you for ur own benefit
my raps have a great degree of brain shit and mneumonics
not meant 4 low pedigree and shame shit wid no logic. . . .
the dept of my lyrics , u aint never explore it
my shit makes even alcoholics like u euphoric..
Some ideas, some multies, some pure rhymes and some complex thoughts!
Showing posts with label My tightest lines. Show all posts
Showing posts with label My tightest lines. Show all posts
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Flipping examples 1
Opponent's line:
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
I spit this in a reply in a rap battle...I liked it,hope you like it too.
the oopponent was talkin about spittina a chewing gum at me ...lolz...n i flipped it back...
also was commentin on my homies and gayish things..so i had to hit him back!
"Commentin on my DUDES and TUBES, you can do nothin better.
UNTIL I MAKE A JUICE OF UR SPOOFS N MIX IT UP WID PEPPER
hustler,i wont even waste a gum on u backstabber.
You spitted ur chewin gum ,FINE
and i CHOKE U UP WID DAT SAME WRAPPER."
Check out the rhymes...
1) dudes -tubes - juice - spoofs
2)better - pepper - backstabber - wrapper
Thinkin out of the box is more important than just rhyming!
the oopponent was talkin about spittina a chewing gum at me ...lolz...n i flipped it back...
also was commentin on my homies and gayish things..so i had to hit him back!
"Commentin on my DUDES and TUBES, you can do nothin better.
UNTIL I MAKE A JUICE OF UR SPOOFS N MIX IT UP WID PEPPER
hustler,i wont even waste a gum on u backstabber.
You spitted ur chewin gum ,FINE
and i CHOKE U UP WID DAT SAME WRAPPER."
Check out the rhymes...
1) dudes -tubes - juice - spoofs
2)better - pepper - backstabber - wrapper
Thinkin out of the box is more important than just rhyming!
(Parental advisory!)
Three dope lines to kill the opponent!
Well, you read my rhymes, my ideas but i would still like to use your OWN skills in your raps or rap battles.No true rapper would want to copy!
UR VERSE STINK LIKE UR PREGNANT MOMMA'S PEE FLOWS.
THE WORST THING IS UR STAGNANT VERSE THAT I DEEP FROZE.
I SEALED UR FATE DA DAY I HEALED UR MOMS CLIT WOES.
Well, the above three lines,really dope , as i call them..wonder sometimes how can i think of such shit!
lets check the rhymes...
1)verse stink - worse thing - sealed - healed
2)pregnant - stagnant
3)pee flows - deep froze - clit woes
Aren't those high quality hymes, come on! i aint praising myself :p
The best thing i like about it is ...."ur stagnant raps that i deep froze"...the idea!
Three dope lines to kill the opponent!
Well, you read my rhymes, my ideas but i would still like to use your OWN skills in your raps or rap battles.No true rapper would want to copy!
UR VERSE STINK LIKE UR PREGNANT MOMMA'S PEE FLOWS.
THE WORST THING IS UR STAGNANT VERSE THAT I DEEP FROZE.
I SEALED UR FATE DA DAY I HEALED UR MOMS CLIT WOES.
Well, the above three lines,really dope , as i call them..wonder sometimes how can i think of such shit!
lets check the rhymes...
1)verse stink - worse thing - sealed - healed
2)pregnant - stagnant
3)pee flows - deep froze - clit woes
Aren't those high quality hymes, come on! i aint praising myself :p
The best thing i like about it is ...."ur stagnant raps that i deep froze"...the idea!
Wednesday, March 5, 2008
Some of my Tightest lines!
I used these lines in a rap battle and they're worth having a look i guess.
I mainly concentrate on multies and super-multies as i call it.
I'LL HIT U BACK AND CAUSE YOU PAINS AND LESIONS IN.
AS I DISS U LIKE A TISSUE SAPPED IN GLUCOSE , STAINED IN GLYCERINE.
What rhymes where in da above?
1) hit u - diss u
2)diss u - tissue
3)back - sapped
4)cause - glucose
5)pain - stained
6)lesions in - glycerine
Not only the rhymes but the lines "hit" the opponent.Well, it can atleast leave the opponent thinkin for a second or two...plus it shows that you gained some knowledge in da bio lab!
I mainly concentrate on multies and super-multies as i call it.
I'LL HIT U BACK AND CAUSE YOU PAINS AND LESIONS IN.
AS I DISS U LIKE A TISSUE SAPPED IN GLUCOSE , STAINED IN GLYCERINE.
What rhymes where in da above?
1) hit u - diss u
2)diss u - tissue
3)back - sapped
4)cause - glucose
5)pain - stained
6)lesions in - glycerine
Not only the rhymes but the lines "hit" the opponent.Well, it can atleast leave the opponent thinkin for a second or two...plus it shows that you gained some knowledge in da bio lab!
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