Opponent:
my rap if ain't d best, but good enuf to get u vexed,
rap ain't jus bout crap , it's more of sensible rhymin of text...
Me:
u say i m insensible just coz you cant undastand it
improve ur language skills i'm a tell you for ur own benefit
my raps have a great degree of brain shit and mneumonics
not meant 4 low pedigree and shame shit wid no logic. . . .
the dept of my lyrics , u aint never explore it
my shit makes even alcoholics like u euphoric..
Some ideas, some multies, some pure rhymes and some complex thoughts!
Showing posts with label Flippin examples. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Flippin examples. Show all posts
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Flipping examples 1
Opponent's line:
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
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