Opponent:
my rap if ain't d best, but good enuf to get u vexed,
rap ain't jus bout crap , it's more of sensible rhymin of text...
Me:
u say i m insensible just coz you cant undastand it
improve ur language skills i'm a tell you for ur own benefit
my raps have a great degree of brain shit and mneumonics
not meant 4 low pedigree and shame shit wid no logic. . . .
the dept of my lyrics , u aint never explore it
my shit makes even alcoholics like u euphoric..
Some ideas, some multies, some pure rhymes and some complex thoughts!
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Flipping examples 1
Opponent's line:
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
"u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help..."
My reply:
"of coz i got a FIREcausin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all u LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS"
-->the internal rhymes "fire,dire,liar"
-->the ending is special for me!.."consequences" rhymes wid "falls in nemesis"
I actually liked the opponent's lines too,that i had a fire only to burn myself..that shit was tight...but i guess my shit was tighter!hopefully...lolz
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