Rap Battle example 2

emcee 1:( a newbie)
I don't care who u r, i don't care wat u do,
u suck big time, yeah tat is true...
u say u rap true & think others r fool,
hey player ur attitude sucks , and da truth is u ain't tat cool...
I smell frustration in every word u rap,
Rap? dude u jus yap...
u got some fire witin, only to burn ur self,
u gotta take a break, boy u need some help...
watever u yap after dis, I giv a fuck,
I'l make it simple homie, wid me don't try ur luck

emcee 2 :(amateur)
u dont jus SMELL frustration mate
u eat, drink, hear, fear,touch it too
wat i mean to say is,its just ur fate
i'll crush u in this battle off late,
,..jus like kids do too,crush a grape
yea u r rite i aint that cool like u ...
coz im the coolest..not jus cool
"i just yap" if thats wat u feel, ur the foolest of all the fools
yea i got FIRE, causin DIRE consequences
to burn to death all LIARS even b4 u falls in NEMESIS
yea i am a sick boy,need some HELP..
come mano-a-mano with me n see for URSELF
y try to reach where you CANT BE
like ICE SHELF,on the land ,wantin to b in da sea?
phew! my attitude well it does suck BIG TIME??
coz we aint here for "hi,helo,hows u ,i m fine?"
we gotta rap ,while u FACK! try to make urself shine
wid pre-written raps that u wrote last nite
u say u rap,??? Yea!! U CAN, u r GOD ,HO LORD
i fuckin mean ,u truly deserve a SHRINE
cuz u rap "fool cool"..."fuck luck"..."self help"..
n thats wat a grade 1 kid can rhyme!!